lerix
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Post by lerix on Nov 28, 2012 22:18:04 GMT
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Race:
Lucavi(Half human)
Class:
Martial Artist
Species& Class Skills:
Demonic Living: Demons often live long lives spent developing their abilities and skills in order to survive. Demons start with two extra abilities or magic at creation (level 1 only). [So you start with either 3 Abilities and 1 Magic, or 2 Magics and 2 Abilities, or finally 3 Magics and 1 Ability.] B Atk:75 Spr:75
Appearance:
Alignment:
Chaotic Good
Profession:
Seed Hopeful/Monk
Personality:
Lexison in his current state of mind is confused soul unsure of his own identity. Kind heart inside he has a soft spot for beautiful women. Due to the kindness he was shown by the people of Balamb and the Garden he feels it’s his duty to protect them. He has a dirty mind when it comes down to fighting he give it his all holding no punches. Behind the kind hearted individual he usually appears to be there is a heart of a warrior.
Lexison was raised in a monastery by a bunch of martial artist monks knowing several different fighting style and disciplines. His mind has been hardened with memories of his past killings and murders, so he has no regrets. At all times Lexison reminds calm cool and collective very little gets under his skin making a mental brick wall. Mediation is a part of his daily routine in which is does on the shores of the island.
He is very open- minded and easy to get along with unless the one hes partnered with stubborn. He’s an excellent worker as he can focus on a task with ease. He’s a strategist in battle he keeps a calm mind which allows his thought to flow quicker. He’s always been agile and powerful it’s in his blood as his father was a warlord. He would use those skills to satisfy his thirst for battle that has stuck with him from his past.
He does have a friendly side to show that he's still part human. He's humble to those that help him when he’s in need. Never will he turn his back on some that would help him. He has the ability to lead other such as a small unit. For those he does befriend he watches after them as if they were family. He believes in that things should be equivalent exchange, nothing in the world if free. He’s a bit of a drinker and a gambler another thing that stuck with him from his past of bar hopping.
Home Continent:
Resides on Balamb Born on Lost
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Character Level:
1
HP:
150
MP:
100
Atk:
190+10
Def:
80
Mag:
30
Spr:
100
Experience:
0
Stat Points:
650+10 from Equipment
Gil:
100
Equipment:
Hado Gloves- These gloves were given to Vash by the priest before his disappearance. They were inscribed with concealment runes to conceal his Lucavi aura from those with the ability to see his true appearance.+10 Att
Character Abilities:
Tier 1 Battle Sense (Passive): Through a highly evolved mind full of compressed knowledge by tapping in to his subconscious Vash can increase the frequency of his senses. Used for RP/ Combat purposes RP he can see/hear/smell things that ordinary being wouldn't be able to sense. When used in battle his can slightly sense ambushes preventing him from be surprised by ordinary foes and gives him an evade that can be used 1 times per battle.
Tier 1 Awakening (Demon Form): Being infused with the blood of a demon has its advantages and disadvantages. By wear the Hado Gloves he’s able to suppress his demon form from sight. By removing both gloves his demon aura will emerge and arms will bulk up and slightly enlarge and hands will become wsharp piercing claws( i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk312/Joel-Everett/RagnatheBloodedgev25.png ). He has yet to discover to how fully tap into his demon abilities so he can only partially awaken. While awakened his attacks are can do of piercing damage breaking though 20 points of anopponent defense.Uses 10 HP+10 MP of Lexison per round until resealed takes one turn to activate.
Scan: 25mp Reveal one foes HP and MP. 1000Gil Magic:Haste
Summons:
None [/style]
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HISTORY:
In the land every land there are those who have born into terrible situations. In Ivalice there is exemption the poor of the land were forced to endure the worst. There was one selective group tired of the torment and decided that turn to a demon for aid. They make the proper conditions to summon a demon to the mortal world and it would cost them gravely. They summoned a Demon know by legend as Vashtor he was an extremely powerful with a humanoid in appearance.
Vashtor threatened to kill them all for summoning him here until he saw their beautiful daughters. Vashtor had a lust for human women and decided that he would help them in exchange for the use of their daughters. They all reluctantly agreed to the demons will except for a mean named Belmont he was monk against the idea of relaying on a demon for salvation. Belmont hid his daughter from sight for weeks, but once Vashtor finished with the last daughter he knew there was one more. He refused to carry out the task without having the man’s daughter.
Her name was Electra she was an intelligent woman with a strong will and desire for greater things. When Vashtor tried to have his way with her she fought back angering him. He forced himself on he and decided to punish her for her behavior. After he finished his dirty deed he said to the mean that in time Electra will solve their problems. He then left the kingdom of Ivalice never to be seen again. The men of the slums were furious with the monk for his defiance until the saw what had happened to his daughter. 9 months after the disappearance of Vashtor Electra gave birth to half demon child, Lexison and died.
Her father we unsure how to deal with this should he kill the child by fear of what he might become or raise him as his own. He came to the conclusion that he’d raise the child in a monastery the child would grow as a normal child but once he reached the age of maturity changes began to accrue. His demon blood began to flow dominantly in his blood stream altering his appearance. Before the monks of the monastery could kill him he left to live on a mountain training his body and mind to control his abilities.
From the top of his mountain he could see the monastery where he was raised and his grandfather lived. About 5 years would pass until he would return to monastery with control of his powers, but on that day things wouldn’t be the way he remembered it. He returned to monastery on fire in ruins with dead bodies and screams feeling the perimeter. He would rush in to find his grandfather to find him still alive hiding in the library.
His grandfather would explain his origin to him and that his father was the one to blame for this. They would begin to leave the monastery only to find Vashtor at the exit blade in hand. “My dear beloved son it’s so nice of you to join the party your grandfather most of told who I am. And I’ve come to fulfill my part of our bargain.” He’d say as he’d throw the blade Lexison’s grandfather killing him. “Such a persistent old man hiding my own son from me serves him right.”
Lexison was infuriated by his father’s acts and burst into his Demonic state to fight his father. Lexison knew he was no match for him especially with the time gap between them. His father showed mercy to his son and only beat him saying, “One of these days my son you’ll be able to defeat me but not for centuries will that be possible.” His father would vanish leaving no trace of his whereabouts and only the blade his grandfather’s body.
Lexison would train himself with anyone possible testing himself working as mercenary for the highest bidder. He’d change his appearance every so often to hind his immortality. For 400 + years he’d search until one day he’d have to leave the lost continent in search of his destined battle with his father. He was following a trail of stories he’d hear in taverns of an unbeatable demon wreaking havoc across Gaia. The last place he’d heard of the demon was in a continent called Galbadia.
He caught the next ship to Galbadia to continue his search for his father. Yet his search wouldn’t last long because the second he reached the port and left the boat he could sense it. His father was here and was making his presence felt he could feel his body being stuck by his father’s cold glaze. He would check the local pub for rumors and when he entered the loud and festive pub became quite. Then he would be blasted out of the pub by an unknown assailant.
He would stand to find his father standing at the entrance so he’d stand and draw his blade. “Now is that anyway to say hello to dear old day hahaha! He’d say maliciously. Lexison would rush at his father at full speed blade extended and he father would just stand there. When his blade would of impelled his father forced the blade into the ground. He father was a powerful foe with extremely powerful skills and abilities to like he’s been more than one person. This is because he can absorb the experience of other demon making the regress in years.
Lexison would be in a deep slumber for about 10 yea and when he did finally awaken he’d appear to be 10 with a fragmented memory. He’d be found by a priest at the church of Balamb and given to the Garden for safe keeping. He’d meet with the Headmaster and be filled in on the bases of Garden life. He’d begin taking classes at the garden and all would be well as it should be for one of his appearance. He would treat the priest like an adopted father and keep in contact with him.
After about a year of garden life he would start combat training and all would be well. His body might have been different but his mind was still full of battle experience that had awakened. They would be highly surprised by his hand to hand combat skills. Then one day he’d be off in the training center and his arms began to burn and turned blood red and sharpened into claws. He’d have a flashback to his past mercenary life.
Before that moment all he could remember is that was born in the kingdom of Ivalice, the name Vashtor, his name and that he was searching for something. He’d go to the priest and tell him his new found knowledge. The priest already knew of Lexison’s demon blood and had sealed it off before bringing him to the garden. He’d tell Lexison what could about demons give Lexison the Hado Gloves to suppress his demon form.
The priest was a former Monk from the monastery at which Lexison was raised and knew it all. He knew Lexison was one with good intentions and encouraged Lexison to push to be a SeeD. Lexison would follow his advice and begin taking special training with the monk. 6 years would pass and the priest would leave Balamb leaving a note for Lexison to keep his heart pure.
Lexison still had no knowledge of which Vashtor was or how he’d gotten here or what he was searching for. All he knows is his new life and that he has abilities that others could only dream of. Every now and then he’ll fall victim to extreme headaches followed by flashbacks to his past but nothing to really help him decode who he really is.
Roleplay Sample:
“Quick follow me if you want to get out of here alive.” Lex would say as he crept down thought the castle halls. He was making an escape from Witbreeze Manor with the head Witbreeze himself. He was accompanied by two of the opposing party’s men if things got out of hand. As it looked like they were about to. He was hired to kill Witbreeze to assure Kaitens reign as head of the council. The task was done all he had to do was get out alive.
He had almost succeeded when the sealed his entrance/exit. So he had to find a new one but was to late he was surrounded by 20 Witbreezes men. The two assistances would rush to battle while Lex stood to survey. It wouldn’t take long to Witbreezes men who were highly trained to make trash of the two before coming to him. He’d awaken his demon blood in his veins and swiftly jump out the window. He wouldn’t really jump to the ground more so just hang by the ledge and while for the men to fall for the trap.
When they sent a man to see if he had fallen he would pull the man down to the 4 story drop. He’d then jump back into the castle completely awakened ready to slaughter the men. They would see him as he was and try to run but it wouldn’t work. Lexison was to quick and too strong to simply out run. He would pierce the men in the hearts with claws and steal the life force. All except for one he always left one to spread the tale. [/style] |
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Post by Demon Lord on Nov 28, 2012 22:52:45 GMT
Tier 1 Battle Sense (Passive): Through a highly evolved mind full of compressed knowledge by tapping in to his subconscious Vash can increase the frequency of his senses. Used for RP/ Combat purposes RP he can see/hear/smell things that ordinary being would be able to sense. When used in battle his can slightly sense ambushes preventing him from be surprised by ordinary foes and gives in evade that can be used 3 times per battle. Belzeras' Thoughts: Er 1 evade only for level 1.
Tier 1 Awakening (Demon Form): Being infused with the blood of a demon has its advantages and disadvantages. By wear the Hado Gloves he’s able to suppress his demon form from sight. By removing both gloves his demon aura will emerge and arms will bulk up and slightly enlarge and hands will become sharp piercing claws(http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk312/Joel-Everett/RagnatheBloodedgev25.png). He has yet to discover to how fully tap into his demon abilities so he can only partially awaken. Making his attacks capable of piercing damage against weak defenses and making every attack drain 20HP and MP. Leeches 5 HP+5MP per round until resealed. Belzeras' Thoughts: There are too many things that this CA is trying to do. Also constant draining of HP and MP is not gonna happen. Also you don't clarify what a weak defense is [also a weak defense is relative, I consider any defense under 2000 weak].
Tier 1: Akuma Impact: Through practice and mediation Vash has the ability to harness his Demon life-force with mana to increase his damage output. Harnessing the mana can be fast or take a few rounds(1-3) it depends on the level of concentration used. Once the Mana has been harnessed it will last for 5 rounds before dispersing. The Mana will gather around his body appearing as a red aura. The Mana will act as a buffer against weak magics blocking the base damage for the duration of the skill or it can be released though contact for greater damage. If he stunned or greatly knocked back his concentration will be broken; forcing him to start over. The release of the mana on impact will cost 30 MP the more damage from magic while in the shield amplifies the damage done on release. ( Damage from impact is Attack+ Damage nulled from shield.) Belzeras' Thoughts:again you don't define weak and frankly the mp cost for the ability that can reduce damage and also increase the damage you deal. And again this is trying to do too much for a level 1.
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lerix
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Post by lerix on Nov 29, 2012 7:13:18 GMT
Tier 1 Battle Sense (Passive): Through a highly evolved mind full of compressed knowledge by tapping in to his subconscious Vash can increase the frequency of his senses. Used for RP/ Combat purposes RP he can see/hear/smell things that ordinary being would be able to sense. When used in battle his can slightly sense ambushes preventing him from be surprised by ordinary foes and gives in evade that can be used 1 times per battle. Edited 1 evade now. Tier 1 Awakening (Demon Form): Being infused with the blood of a demon has its advantages and disadvantages. By wear the Hado Gloves he’s able to suppress his demon form from sight. By removing both gloves his demon aura will emerge and arms will bulk up and slightly enlarge and hands will become wsharp piercing claws( i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk312/Joel-Everett/RagnatheBloodedgev25.png ). He has yet to discover to how fully tap into his demon abilities so he can only partially awaken. While awakened his attacks are capable of piercing damage.Uses 5 HP+5MP of Lexisons per round until resealed. Edited removed the drain and made the cost of the transformation easier to understand. the constant drain is the cost. Removed the talk about the piercing defenses and removed the drain Tier 1: Akuma Impact: Through practice and mediation Vash has the ability to harness his Demon life-force with mana to increase his damage output. Harnessing the mana can be fast or take a few rounds(1-3) it depends on the level of concentration used. Once the Mana has been harnessed it will last for 5 rounds before dispersing. The Mana will gather around his body appearing as a red aura. He stunned or greatly knocked back his concentration will be broken; forcing him to start over. The release of the mana on impact can stun the opponent stopping them from using an evasion technical for the number of round the mana was charged. The attack has a base of 30 x Level and cost 35. Edited removed the shield talk made it more basic.
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Post by Demon Lord on Nov 29, 2012 21:46:56 GMT
Battle Sense: Good
Awakening: Right thats much better, glad that part of the issue was just that it was worded poorly. However you need to clarify when you mean by piercing damage, its fine that the to keep this active you are losing HP and MP per turn.
Akuma Impact: Right the basics of this is Base of 30*lvl damage for 35MP and prevents evasion of this attack and for some reason lasts 5 rounds and may take 0-3 rounds to charge.
1) Scaling damage if done needs to be a lower base damage. Becuase at level 3 the base damage becomes 90 for 35MP and will only get higher from there. 2) MP cost for scaling attacks need to be higher. 3) An Evade evades, its what it does so technically they can evade your attempt to 'evade' their evade. 4) You need to explain what actually effects it and how long this ability needs to charge. [IE takes 4 actions to charge, use on fifth. Doing any other action instead of charging cancels the charging.]
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lerix
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Post by lerix on Nov 30, 2012 6:27:37 GMT
I cleaned up the piercing talk in Awakening and completely changed the last. When you read it think about Mirror force from yugioh kinda.
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Post by Demon Lord on Dec 2, 2012 20:13:25 GMT
Battle Sense: Good
Awakening: Okay, I see what you are aiming for.... Interesting, make it "Ignore 20 points of opponents Defense when dealing atk damage" and make the HP/MP Drain 10 points. Also please remember that this takes 1 action to activate.
Akuma Impact: Right, I also see what you are aiming for here... And frankly its too strong even with the 3 action charge time. Denied.
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lerix
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Post by lerix on Dec 6, 2012 16:56:02 GMT
Okay i just removed the last skill and added scan after changing awakening to what was asked.
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Post by Demon Lord on Dec 6, 2012 19:39:58 GMT
First of all apologies for not replying to your PM things have been busy on this end. The bio is accepted as it is, however regarding the CA that was asked about via PMs it was much too powerful as it was it would require a lot of work to be at a acceptable level, however I am willing to sort of try and work on it with you over PMs so that you could get it at a later date.
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