Adelina Starmaiden (take two)

[Adelina Starmaiden]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=style, width: 650px; background-image:url(http://i.imgur.com/pN4s1.png); -moz-border-radius: 40px 0px 40px 0px; border-radius:40px 0px 40px 0px; padding: 10px; border: #181818 solid 10px; ] [STYLE=width: 400px; background-color: 333333; padding-top: 4px; text-align; center; text-transform: uppercase; font-size: 16px; -moz-border-radius: 40px 0px 0px 0px; border-radius:40px 0px 0px 0px; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 5px; color: 777777;] Adelina Starmaiden [/style][STYLE= border: 8px solid #333333; width: 100px; margin-top: -55px; float: right;][/style][STYLE=width: 340px; background-color: 181818; padding-top: 4px; text-transform: uppercase; font-family: arial; letter-spacing: -0.5px; color: 777777; text-align: justify;] age: 26 sex: Female sexual orientation: heterosexual [/style][STYLE= width: 400px; background-color: 5e5e5e; text-align: justify; padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; line-height: 9px; font-family: verdana; font-size: 9px; color: 181818; -moz-border-radius: 0px 0px 40px 0px; border-radius:0px 0px 40px 0px;] Race: Native (Cleyran) Class: White Mage Species& Class Skills: Species bonus - Local: The natives of Gaia are very different from each other, each native has a 100 extra points to distribute at creation and also gain a further 100 points to all of their stats temporarily when fighting in their homeland. You cannot continuously create threads in your homeland, your character must travel around. Starting option: C MP:100 Spr:50 Appearance: Alignment: Good Profession: Traveller/dancer Personality: Laid back, cheerful and optimistic, it takes a lot to force Adelina to become over emotional or to get her down. She is kind and generally sweet natured although rather naive. She is a little too quick to trust in others, particularly if she likes them or finds them interesting. She is also a little bit of an airhead, i.e not the sharpest tool in the box, which along with her naivety, can often result in her running into trouble. She loves exploring and in particular making new friends, whom she will treat with the utmost respect. Nevertheless, she is not afraid to let her feelings known, should she feel that she or others are being mistreated. Adelina is not afraid to be the centre of attention, in fact being a dancer she revels in it, but only if for the right reasons. Negative attention can make her feel embarrassed and wanting to hide away. In a crisis, Adelina prefers to remain quiet and allow others to take the lead. She is happy to lend her support though, should the need arise, using her skills of persuasion and/or white magics to do so. When called for, Adelina can adopt the kind of disposition that has been known to grant her own way from others. She doesn't mind compromise, but has been known to pout should she not like how a situation has turned out. This tends not to last to long, thankfully, and she will still have ones back no matter what! It is also a bad idea to insult her, no matter how quietly, as thanks to growing up in a town surrounded by a perpetual sandstorm has given her excellent hearing. Home Continent: Mist Continent [/style] [STYLE=width: 400px; background-color: 333333; padding-top: 4px; text-align; center; text-transform: uppercase; font-size: 16px; -moz-border-radius: 40px 0px 0px 0px; border-radius:40px 0px 0px 0px; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 5px; color: 777777;] Statistics [/style][STYLE= border: 8px solid #333333; width: 100px; margin-top: -55px; float: right;][/style][STYLE=width: 340px; background-color: 181818; padding-top: 4px; text-transform: uppercase; font-family: arial; letter-spacing: -0.5px; color: 777777; text-align: justify;] What do you use to kick ass? [/style][STYLE= width: 400px; background-color: 5e5e5e; text-align: justify; padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; line-height: 12px; font-family: verdana; font-size: 9px; color: 181818; -moz-border-radius: 0px 0px 40px 0px; border-radius:0px 0px 40px 0px;] Character Level: 1 HP: 200 MP: 250 Atk: 75 Def: 100 Mag: 175 Spr: 150 Experience: 1000 Stat Points: 800 Gil: 2600 Equipment: Transverse ocarina: A flute-like instrument of Cleyran origin and craftsmanship. It is adorned with a swirled pattern representing the sandstorm that protects it's home city. Some kind of magical power seems to emanate from within it (+10mag). Character Abilities: Level 1 - Sweet melody: A song played on her ocarina that attempts to confuse all enemy targets. Costs 20mp. Magic: Level 1 - Cure: Restores target for 150hp (+mag) and costs 25mp. Level 1 - Aero: Deals 50 Dmg (+mag -opp. spr) and cost 10mp. Summons: N/A [/style] [STYLE=width: 400px; background-color: 333333; padding-top: 4px; text-align; center; text-transform: uppercase; font-size: 16px; -moz-border-radius: 40px 0px 0px 0px; border-radius:40px 0px 0px 0px; font-family: arial narrow; letter-spacing: 5px; color: 777777;] Past Times [/style][STYLE= border: 8px solid #333333; width: 100px; margin-top: -55px; float: right;][/style][STYLE=width: 340px; background-color: 181818; padding-top: 4px; text-transform: uppercase; font-family: arial; letter-spacing: -0.5px; color: 777777; text-align: justify;] Past Times . [/style][STYLE= width: 400px; background-color: 5e5e5e; text-align: justify; padding-right: 10px; padding-left: 10px; padding-bottom: 10px; line-height: 12px; font-family: verdana; font-size: 9px; color: 181818; -moz-border-radius: 0px 0px 40px 0px; border-radius:0px 0px 40px 0px;] HISTORY: Born in Cleyra, the sister city of Burmecia, to an oracle and a merchant, Adelina's start in life was not much different to the others born in the city of raging sandstorms. She had one older brother, whom she got on well enough with, and lived with him and her parents, being raised in a loving home. From an early age, she had shown an unusual amount of magical ability for her people that she was encourage to develop and be proud of. As well as honing her white magic skills, Adelina was also trained by the cathedrals dancers in order to one day join them among their ranks. This was so that they would have someone with magical ability to help perform the customary ritual that was required in order to keep their protective sandstorm from fading. Later in life, her brother left for Burmecia and she too became highly curious about the outside world and longed to leave Cleyra and explore. Those around her attempted to discourage her from this foolish course of action, after all the sandstorm surrounding them was there for a reason, but in the end were forced to relent thanks to her unwily charm. It wasn't as if it was impossible to pass though after, just that the trek down the trunk would take some doing. No one knows quite how she managed it, but she packed up and made the trip down to the world below, emerging at the base of the tree in which Cleyra was situated. Now she travels, sharing her dance and magic with the world in exhange for everything it has to offer! Roleplay Sample: See 'Noel Kreiss' [/style]

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[Omega]

I'm unsure about your CA. Does it just boost her attack by 10, or does it boost her attack by 10 as well as her normal Atk, making it a boost of 85, currently?

[Demon Lord]

Doesn't matter, I'm not allowing a stat boost for a level 1, if you want to boost stats, save up for Brave/Faith or one of the Premade abilities

[Adelina Starmaiden]

Oof, okay. Making this bio a wip for now as I'll need to rethink a lot. Thank you both for taking a look

Edit: Sorry that took a while, profile now modified!

[Omega]

How many targets does it affect? It does not clearly state how many foes it could effect. If it's a singular opponent 20MP cost will be fine, but, if it's 2/3/4 or all opponents I would up the MP cost.

[Demon Lord]

Right, honestly everything looks good, just need that clarification on whether your CA is targeting all or just targeting one. Pretty sure you mean all targets which is fine by me, seeing as this is only a chance to inflict confuse.

[Adelina Starmaiden]

Okay, clarified

[Demon Lord]

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